I wrote my first piece of poetry or something like that today. This gloomy kind of thing popped into my head on my way back from university. Feel free to comment!
REFLEXIONS
People around me
I'm walking through them
Unnoticed
Misunderstood
Will they ever know me?
Do I know myself?
Feeling lonely
Feeling not a part
Am I a part of this world?
Or do I live in my own?
Questions are haunting me
Let them come to me
And turn myself away
I want to trust you
But a part of me is locked
Deep inside myself
They are my innermost thoughts
In the end
We remain all alone
Locked with our darkest secrets
Sounds kind of depressing, doesn't it? Well, I'm not feeling depressed or sad today. No, everything's quite alright, but sometimes things like that hit me truely unexpected right in the face. I don't know why and I can't help it. It's just the way it happens. Maybe it's part of my nature. Sometimes I really do think to much. My mind just starts wandering and in the end something like this comes up.
Maybe I will use it as an opener to my story in progress. It suits my main character Elisabeth in a way.
REFLEXIONS
People around me
I'm walking through them
Unnoticed
Misunderstood
Will they ever know me?
Do I know myself?
Feeling lonely
Feeling not a part
Am I a part of this world?
Or do I live in my own?
Questions are haunting me
Let them come to me
And turn myself away
I want to trust you
But a part of me is locked
Deep inside myself
They are my innermost thoughts
In the end
We remain all alone
Locked with our darkest secrets
Sounds kind of depressing, doesn't it? Well, I'm not feeling depressed or sad today. No, everything's quite alright, but sometimes things like that hit me truely unexpected right in the face. I don't know why and I can't help it. It's just the way it happens. Maybe it's part of my nature. Sometimes I really do think to much. My mind just starts wandering and in the end something like this comes up.
Maybe I will use it as an opener to my story in progress. It suits my main character Elisabeth in a way.